Review: Short story: "The Price of Admission" by Dustin Thao

The Price of Admission by Dustin Thao
Published June 2026 via Amazon Original Stories

Evan's life isn't easy, but he makes do: between scholarships and part-time jobs, he's confident that he can move up in the world and fulfill his mother's dreams for him. And there's a boy—one who comes from an entirely different world, but who seems to see Evan for who he is...at least, behind closed doors.

This is one in a collection of coming-of-age stories, and one of the most interesting things about it is the ambiguity of the role of Dalton, that boy from a different world, for so much of the book. Evan is not ashamed of who he is or who his family are or the world he comes from (immigrant background, tight financial situation), but he's aware that Dalton might have reservations about their different financial backgrounds, and he responds accordingly, bending over backwards to fit better into Dalton's world. I wondered, for much of the story, how far he might be willing to go to excuse Dalton's behaviour, and at what point one of the boys would have to change their tune.

The telling is a little bit removed—the story isn't long, but it covers a significant chunk of time, so a lot of the events of the story are told through summary rather than scene. I think I might have preferred to see fewer events, but in more detail; or maybe just a longer work where the individual elements of the book could be given a bit more room to breathe. (Also interesting, in the end, who Evan chooses to criticise, and what type of work he chooses to pursue in the long run; I'd have loved to see that explored more.) Still, it explores interesting themes and allows most of the characters to have some complexity.

Thanks to the author and publisher for providing a review copy through NetGalley.